1. Jenny Chen (5) URL: http://ilovemyfooda.blogspot.sg/2012/09/my-food-intake-assessment-results_18.html
First, Bunny (Jenny) is so funny. She starts with her fangirl self, posting pictures of her JJ Lin and some magicians. I guess it's a good way to start a hyper blog (as you can see later on..). Knowing her well, she's that kind of girly girl who's really afraid of getting "fat thighs". It's no wonder she does her food analysis and tabulation really well. I think she got confused about the analysis part. She did it on her dish instead of her 3-day diet. But since she's knows the main functions of the tools, it's fine. And she has pictures!! And they look so tasty. But she's lacking in her reflection on the process. 3 lines aren't enough my dear! She could have stated in detail what had happened but since she's a Jenny, she probably didn't encounter much in her practical, hence the little reflection. She focused too much on funny stuff. Not that I mind though, they ARE pretty funny. XD
2. Jing Ying (6) URL: http://chewjingying.wordpress.com/
2 words. Oh mybuddha. What is wrong with this kid?! *(Rather, what is NOT wrong with this kid.) She has everything. Like everything. And her thought process is super clear. Well, what can I expect from a Jing Ying. Such a perfectionist. Now I feel bad about my own blog. Terrible. Just terrible. I mean, the tracing is there, the analysis is there, the reflections are all there. Sigh. Perfect. Mrs Abbas, if you haven't read her blog, you don't need to anymore. Just give her all 4s.
3. Rafeeqa Ameenuthin (25) URL: http://foodandnutritionptrafeeqa.blogspot.sg/
Ironic how I didn't get my 'other half' 's blog huh. I couldn't get through to her coz it's quite late. But anyway, Feeqa is another one of my good friend from the second half. Sorry if this caused you any inconvenience but her blog is pretty good too. But since I did this after reading Jing Ying's one, I have some critics. She generally does well for the analysis and research, and also the suggesting the healthy dish part since she gave reasons and there's depth in her thinking. But her reflection of other blogs can be improved in my opinion. She lacks depth in her critic as to how other blogs can be improved upon. She could have suggested on how the blogs can be improved instead of just pointing out what has been done wrongly. The spelling errors don't help her case. XD But overall, great stuff, a bit plain (but I'm not at a position to say it since mine doesn't even include colors) but well done. :)
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